Kawaii no Ai - Comments

I'm from the comment swap, too. I liked this, it was cute, and as has been mentioned before, this was well-constructed with likable characters. There are, however, restrictions of development that come with one shots, but overall you got a feel of tone and atmosphere, and I have to say that it was enjoyable, with those undertones of frustration and denial that Kei felt. I will read some of your other pieces of writing :3

Hello from the lovely Mibba Comment Swap (:
I really like this, it's beautifully written and the characters flow together nicely. You always write so nicely and it makes me smile. I'm not a big anime fan, but good job deary. Keep on writing!

Just another friend from the Mibba comment swap. I really like the characters in this story along with your personal writing style. You write beautifully and it always flows together. Keep on writing!

This was beautifully written. I could sense the inner battle Kei felt in himself both over his feelings for Hamao and coming to terms with his sexuality. The way he felt that he wasn't really gay because he hadn't fully acted on feelings, but just a bet. I don't usually read slash, but comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did because you have a great talent for showing raw emotion in a story.

Since I didn't realize that the comment had to be 200 characters I'll comment again. This story really isn't my thing, but I did read it. I don't mind gay stories, but I'm not a big anime fan. I know nothing about these characters so it's hard for me to get into the story.

Comment swap brought me here. You have a great writing skill, but these kind of stories have never really been my thing. The Japanese names confuse me.