Sorry for the lateness of my comment, but here you go :)
Firstly, props on the banner, i love the texture effect you've put on it I think it suits it quiet well and engages the readers attention. Secondly, kudos for using my name :) big props to you!
I like the complicated relationship Tyler and Aimee have, and that they don't seem to have the cliché best friend thing going on. I also like the fact that Tyler seems to be the one smitten, I read so many stories where the female protagonist is so in love with the male protagonist. It's cute but gets old.
I also like the fact that this seems to go over a course of years, and that they ended up together of course. Loved the quote where she said "I hold my breath because half the time you smell like hockey gear and it’s self-preservation," it made me laugh because i know from experience that sports guys smell like funk when they haven't showered after practice.
Firstly, props on the banner, i love the texture effect you've put on it I think it suits it quiet well and engages the readers attention. Secondly, kudos for using my name :) big props to you!
I like the complicated relationship Tyler and Aimee have, and that they don't seem to have the cliché best friend thing going on. I also like the fact that Tyler seems to be the one smitten, I read so many stories where the female protagonist is so in love with the male protagonist. It's cute but gets old.
I also like the fact that this seems to go over a course of years, and that they ended up together of course. Loved the quote where she said "I hold my breath because half the time you smell like hockey gear and it’s self-preservation," it made me laugh because i know from experience that sports guys smell like funk when they haven't showered after practice.
Well written and good job!