Waterproof Mascara - Comments

ehLizabeth (100)

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I'm obviously not GREAT at English.. I try, but we cant be amazingly wonderful at everything, right?
Thank you for your advice, hourglass :)

March 18th, 2011 at 10:04am

the redhead's cho (100)

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I do like this prologue. It has an ease to it, Kind of like just talking to someone which is really nice. I noticed a few grammatical errors, but that's not too bad. And it would be nice to add a space between the paragraphs if only for a bit of ease of reading. Overall though, I think that you have something with a great potential here. If you ever want a beta, I would be glad to help and if I may, could I make you a banner and layout. I just wanna as a gift to you :)

March 18th, 2011 at 09:33am

NakedGrape (100)

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Do not give up. Rad.

March 18th, 2011 at 09:24am