I no I'm a little late, lol, but I loved your story. From the first chapter to the last. I must admitt, I didn't expect the last 10 chapters to play out the way they did, but they were awesome. A perfect bitter sweet story. And why does that same comment keep coming up on your comment page? lol.
I no I'm a little late, lol, but I loved your story. From the first chapter to the last. I must admitt, I didn't expect the last 10 chapters to play out the way they did, but they were awesome. A perfect bitter sweet story. And my does that same comment keep coming up on your comment page? lol.
I found this while looking for an Orginal Ficton amid all the freaking Fan Fics and am really glad I read it even though I don't read teen pregnancy stories as a rule. I liked that the chapters were pretty short but with the POVs there wasn't a lot of details(sorry I'm a detail nut). I also liked how every time I was thinking, "okay, this is getting boring," something else would come up to make it intresting again. And the ending...wow I wasn't expecting that. It's kind of bittersweet and normally I don't like that kind of thing, but this one was really, REALLY good :)
Hi, I found your story by chance, and glancing at a few chapters led threw all twenty, lol. I have to say I really love your story. Growing up, I knew several girls in a similar situation, and I'm glade to see someone write out such a story. Reading it, I can actually visualize your characters to the best of my ability, lol. But long comment short(a bit late for that i see), great story. I'm deffenetly interested in seeing how it all plays out, and very much anxious for the next chapter. -april(LuckyLubby)