"You’re carrying a big gay torch for him." Oh my god that line had me dying! Just wanted to let you know that.
Overall, I really enjoyed what you did with your story. I love 20s fics & really I had no idea that you would take the story here with that picture. It was super inventive. I was expecting Ryan to be in tights! Your idea carried over really well & I like the use of the period dialogue. It made it very believable and authentic. You really painted a picture in my head with this.
Very good work, you've done here. I really enjoyed the simplicity of their love.
Overall, I really enjoyed what you did with your story. I love 20s fics & really I had no idea that you would take the story here with that picture. It was super inventive. I was expecting Ryan to be in tights! Your idea carried over really well & I like the use of the period dialogue. It made it very believable and authentic. You really painted a picture in my head with this.
Very good work, you've done here. I really enjoyed the simplicity of their love.