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  • XToxic_AlibiX

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    I will get to writing my chapter soon. sorry it is taking so long have lots of things to do.
    May 3rd, 2011 at 12:18am
  • MayTheForceBeWithYou

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    its okay but don't repeat every chapter to get a diffrent point of view,only on important parts
    i think that would helpp
    March 19th, 2011 at 06:16pm
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