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  • January Rose

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    Oh my gosh, this is so sad! (Very well written though btw)
    July 6th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • chaos--

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    I love it, Beara.
    August 1st, 2011 at 02:28am
  • bo_Omshakalaka_

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    This is really good. You followed all the rules, which is a good thing. Also, your layout is very pretty!
    Your grammar and spelling are great, thank you for that.
    The way you wrote it is intriguing. You explain it very well, the readers know exactly what she feels. And I think that even some can relate to it. Every girl has problems about (a part of) her body.
    Over all, great job!
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:22pm
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