Swimming in Your Subconscious - Comments

This story was quite adorable. It reminded me a bit of The Notebook with the awaiting letters except in this case Ross only wrote one time. It was a very good use of your photo. I like how you can sense Brendon's desperation at the start of the story. Also, I enjoy how you can sense the emotion in Ryan's words from his letter. You did a good job.

Gasp! The end!? I really didn't want that to end! This would have been such a good long story, I need more rydens like that ): but I really did like the story, as I pointed out before:p I just damn, idk it was well written and all, I just liked it a lot(: lol okay I'm done rambling!

Holy fucken shit. Pardon my language but I seriosuly love this stroy, usually I love any rydens but seriously this is so good and its only the third chapter. I wanna know some of the letters so update soon please!? (That's me being not to subtly impatient:p)