Has Beens and Newbies Have One Thing in Common: Scene Time - Comments

I am a Fall Out Boy fan, but I've never read any fanfiction on them. I'm so glad that this was my first one! It's not some generic story; it's got some humor to it, and I love the way that you're using the characters from their songs. It’s also really sad, so I feel like I’m getting the whole emotional spectrum (sometimes all at once). I’m really rooting for Dr. Benz and Mr. Sandman though! Everyone deserves their own suiteheart after all :)

*comment swap* hi! I've never read FOB fan fiction before, and I really loved this! Your writing is just fantastic!! I like how you used their lyrics in your work, they fitted in nicely. Benzedrine really creeps me out but he's really awesome too. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes, none jumped out at me. I really hope you carry on writing this because it's amazing and it deserves a lot more recognition. (: PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! xxxx

This definitely just got me to turn on a little Fall Out Boy. I'm loving this simply because it's something that hasn't been done before. Now I'm singing America's Suitehearts at the top of my lungs. Keep this up!

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I swear to god this is so amazing I couldn't stop reading even though my eyes felt like they were falling off >< This is really really good, I simply love the way you write, I can't wait to read more!

This is so well written. I seriously can't believe you do not have more comments or recommendations. I understand it may not be a very popular subject, but your writing deserves to be noticed. There aren't many writers on this site that write with your kind of merit. I am in awe of your writing capabilities. This story is definitely unique and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Definitely can't wait to read more.

Oh. And can I just say Benzedrine definitely makes me squirm? His character seems so malicious, but he’s the kind of sinister person that keeps me begging for more. Does that make sense? Bahaha. I can’t get enough of him. Seriously. Update already. I need to know where this story is going.

This is so well written. I seriously can't believe you do not have more comments or recommendations. I understand it may not be a very popular subject, but your writing deserves to be noticed. There aren't many writers on this site that write with your kind of merit. I am in awe of your writing capabilities. This story is definitely unique and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Definitely can't wait to read more.

Oh. And can I just say Benzedrine definitely makes me squirm? His character seems so malicious, but he’s the kind of sinister person that keeps me begging for more. Does that make sense? Bahaha. I can’t get enough of him. Seriously. Update already. I need to know where this story is going.

The story is so unique and the uniqueness makes it so addictive to read. I hope you will continue on writing this story.

Mmm, I love XO. I wonder why?! :D

again I must point out how well written this is, I am in love =)

and I adore the way you slip in FOB lyrics and such without making it alkl obnoxious, it jsut flows with everything elese.

AMAZING!

I really like this so far, theres something addictive about the way it's written I must go back and re-read, update soon!!

Update! I wanna hear moooore!!!

:DDD Chapter two is even more amazing than chapter one! Meh wants to hear moooooore!

Luuuuurve it. <3333