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  • teengrl2

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    AWWW!!! I loved it! =) It was amazing! =)
    March 20th, 2011 at 10:11am
  • andrea.howls

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    I loved this!

    a few words were misspelled BUT I LOVED THIS!
    It was amazing <3
    March 20th, 2011 at 09:36am
  • MadisonLynn

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    This was kind of hard to read. I couldn't finish it because of the repetition of adjectives too close together. It distracted me and I could focus less on the story, because the words didnt flow as well as they could have. I LOVED the story line, it's a great idea. Just maybe replace (for example) one of the beautifuls in the second paragrpah with like lovely or something?
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:29am
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