This is exciting! I like the story, and I've only read the first chapter. What would you say about me doing some simple editing on it and sending it back to you to see how you like it? It would all be suggestions, of course, but I just noticed a few mistakes that would be easy to fix ;)
I have to go do mundane things such as cleaning and stufffs, so I'll read the rest tomorrow, and then I'll do my whole review shabang.
Thanks for reading SWTT :) and it makes me happy to read random stories XD