The Dates. - Comments

Omg!! Poor Freaking Andy!!! I Wanna See A Picture Of Him When His Makeover Is Done!! XD

i like it so far....

"There were pictures of One Direction. Everywhere." - YESSS! Claps and cheers! One Direction: no socks, crazy hair, no instruments. They ARE the future!!
Loved it, so much. Jake talking fashion cracked me up.
Looking forward to reading moarrr. But I'm not gonna be demanding about it cuz that would be super hypocritical of me (cuz my story updating track record has gone down the crapper).
<3

OMG pleaseplease have them do research on One Direction. Just one little paragraph describing it would crack me up and I would love it!
Of course, I'll love whatever you wrote, but I'm just puttin it out there that it would be awesome!
:)

ZOMG UR BACK IN ACTION!
Chapter 13: "Girls brush their hair like, all the time and stuff." LOLOO! I love how the combing of Andy's hair was, like, integral to the chapter! Brilliant.
Chapter 14: I don't know yet if I like Angelica for Andy but I LOVE her confidence! That girl is balls out all the way! Good character, yo. Like her a LOT.
Chapter 16: "move out the way, bitches" LMAO! But WHOA though Jake was kind of an ass hat to Emma! Maybe I'm reading that wrong, but it seemed like he popped off on her for just being who she is... iunno.
LOLO! Nonsensical is a great word, but I have no idea how to work it into a normal conversation without sounding pretentious as fuq.
Update again cuz this is awesome! (p.s. I tooootally should have listened to you about 50 Shades of Grey, man. What a waste of tiiime. Pleh. Blech) :D

Okey dokey comment number four-in-a-row!
Awwwww! Emma and Jake; that's cute. They did have some good tension between them when they first met... what with the fabulous swanning word and all (freakin' j'adore that word!).
I was predicting a lil' that Emma and Andy would get together... so now I have no idea who he's gonna end up with or what's gonna happen or what! =D
Update soon, lovie!

Oh whoop! I realized I'd read the chapter update a couple days ago but then got distracted and didn't comment on it! Mah bad.
So, first and foremost: lmFao! Your poem was freakin' grade A awesome! Hilarious. Loved it.
Iunno, you know, I kinda like Luce. Andy shouldn't be so dismissive of her, hehe. She's... quirky. Kinda weird, yeah, of course, but she's nice.
... and clearly adoring lol. =D
Update soOooOOoon. <3

Emma is awesome! I really like her.
So I was reading along and then BAM this word came on the screen: "swanning" and I freakin' loved it! I loved the way Jake used it, I loved the way it looked, I'd never seen it before. I looked it up in Microsoft Word Dictionary and it's, like, exclusively a UK verb- but I love it so much! I'm totally gonna use it, its fabulous!
Swanning. LOL! That is soOoOo great!
Update soooon!
So then how did your university interview go??

Agreed. Megabitch.
NEXT!
=D
I liked how Jake stood up for Andy! His fear of R. Grey, the Goth jerk, was overpowered by his best-friendship with Andy.
Best-friendship, yep.

BITCH!! :\
next one? soon? like...nowish?
please? :P

I was looking at your characters and I just noticed you mixed up confident with 'confidant' under Angelica Hall's description. Unless... is she good at keeping secrets? Or does she have a lot of confidence? Confidence, right? (is the word confidence starting to look weird? it looks weird to me now lol)
I nit pick because I love <3 =} xo.

YEHEHESSS! Talk with a Sean Connery accent. That would be wickedly cool.
=]

LMAO!
"You know this Rebecca Grey girl? You think she knows Rebecca Black? That'd be awesome. That Friday song really kicks ass." Jake said. "Friday, Friday, gotta get down on Friday!"
Hehehe! That crazay lil bitch is like thirteen. I like her friends when she's singing in the backseat of the car... both girls on either side of her have braces!! Ohhohoho adolescence.
Ok, I'm gonna go back and read the last chapter =D. Just had to say that about Rebecca Black <3

WOOO!!! :D the interviews will be starting soon :D
Andy better pull himself together :P hopefully he'll meet da right one XD

pfft, and it wasnt dragged out too much. it was necessary XP

I love this story!
Jake is awesome!! Even though I feel like hitting him for liking that stupid song. :\
:D can't wait for more!! I wanna see who he chooses :D
update soon...since y'know its the easter holidays you should be able to update more often :P

AND HE'S WATCHIN' US ALL WITH THE EYEEE... OF THE TIGER!
Hehehe! I also like the bit with "do you think she bites the heads off bats like Ozzy Osbourne?" Jake has killer taste in old school music =)
LOL; I totally thought Jake and Andrew were going to look up the girls on their list in Andrew's old yearbooks or something. Hehe, they should have a scoring system: points for looks (eyes, body, hair etc.); music taste (shitty not shitty); generosity (how much they would be willing to pay for stuff on dates). =}
Lol or whatever you write I'm sure will kick ass =D
Lookin' forward to more!

GAH! Shuddup! Jake by Alex Pettyfer?! Awesome, that guy is hawwwt. (- p.s.)

LOLOL! I told them that you cry at night when you're alone and stuff like that. HA! I can't rewrite ver batem and make it as freakin' hilarious as you wrote it. The way you wrote it sounded like Jake was a real boy making stuff up that he thought girls liked to hear- good touch, freakin' hilarious!
Hehe! Mucho enjoyment =D
Lookin' forward to more and le start of the interviews! (ps, I like that Luce in your Characters page is Avril Lavigne- lol, love it. "I'm the best damn thing that your eyes have ever seen!")

Loving it :)
subscribed <3
cant wait for more.
Jake is hillarious.

I hope your tummy feels better!
Luvvv the Jake-Andrew friendship dynamic! Jake is a boss.
LOL! Mr. Morris hasn't been sacked because the headmistress is in love with him. <3 Awesome
Can't wait for the interviews to start! I can totally imagine Jake acting like Andrew's agent, like he's a famous actor or something.