One Foot in the Grave - Comments

I Love This Story! Update soon, please. I am go to tell my friends about this story.

You said you had problems with writing this chapter but you didnt fail to keep your readers compelled, I loved the conflic t between raf and Lucian, and the background story of Lucian is amazing, really well thought out and planned, Im also really excited to read the next chapter, it being your favourite so far xD

i love this story so much!!

The extra days to post this, were well worth it. Keep 'em coming!

I would have liked to see her dance the way described. Sounds magical. Wish I could feel the music like that and just dance. Update soon!!!!!!!!

It appears as if she might have a life-long friendship with that dancing nest. Thank you for updating on time for us, we appreciate it, 'cause this just so happens to be one of the few original stories on Mibba and we enjoy reading it. :)

You HAVE to continue this story. Does she go back to Raf or does she stay with the vampire???

Hell yeah I enjoyed the vampire's appearance, ugh so excited to know what he plans on doing now.
Disappointed in Raf D: Why you be hatin on her Raf? Why?~
Aha but im hopinngg he's more jealous of the vampire than he is angry at Sigrid.
New layout is awesome btw, very suave I think, very cool <3

I knewwww it. That sucks Raf is so hurt and isnt trying to understand her side though =/

I'm itching to find out why Lucien is so darn protective of her, there's gotta be more than just her being the last of her kind. Please scratch my itch soon. :) lol

Love the new chapter. I am really eager to learn about her ancestry. It must be really exciting for her character. I feel sorry for Rafael though. He's such a caring guy, Update soon.

Love the story. I wonder what that vampire wants from her exactly, he is just a little bit creepy. XD Update soon!!!

Yaaay, new chapter and new layout :D
Both Fantastic, Im really psyched for the vamp to reappear, and to know what exactly he wants <3

I'm so glad you're updating again. I'm really liking where this story is heading. Oh, and I love that song from Tangled, as well. ;)

i love it thanks, for the quick update!
I can't wait for her to show or tell them what she really is!!
i hope they - meaning the pack and Rafael - take it well!!!

oooh, I knew he would! That vampy won't let him do that though. Oh wow, it's hard to choose so early who would be better for her! They both seem perfect but vampy understands her true self so much better! ugh! such a hard decision for her =/ does that mark on her kinda make her the vamps mate already though?

the story is great so far

please update again very soon!!!!

wow! i love this story, please update soooooon!

i love it!!!
You should definitely keep it up!!!
Please update again soon!!!