Break Me Down - Comments

  • teenagedream91

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    @ HerNameIsAlice
    Haha yes it's Johnny. An old two-shot that I wrote and surprised that you found it XD
    May 13th, 2013 at 08:24am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Johnny!!!!
    May 13th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • JustThinking

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    I'm not sure I this contest is still going so good luck? Otherwise just know that no matter what, this is a really good story and so was the ending ^^
    July 31st, 2012 at 10:29pm
  • HailMisery

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    I love the ending :D I really do... it's amazing ^^
    March 26th, 2011 at 04:34am
  • hachie

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    Aw how cute!
    She really couldn't live without him could she.
    So it seems like that is her own personal nickname for him!
    It's a good thing that she shallowed her pride and actually said yes to him!
    The reason she rejected him was because she was afraid that it just end before their life began!
    The ending was so cute, at least she paid him back for driving all the way over.
    March 26th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • HailMisery

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    For a first timer it was hell of a scene :P

    I love how you did it.... I do hope the Garden Gnome will e back soon :( sad about the fight..

    Like the way you wrote it.
    March 21st, 2011 at 02:03am
  • hachie

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    Wow!
    Man this oneshot really has a lot of angst.
    She doesn't want to get married but he does and now she is stubborn to admit that she can't live without him!
    He is indeed a sneaky garden gnome!!! XD
    I look forward to the other half!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    March 21st, 2011 at 01:34am