Embrace the Rain - Comments

Five years later and it still hasn't gotten old! I love this <3

awe this is very cute
In a big Jacob fan so this put a smile on my face

I found it again! Are you sick of the comments yet? Loved it <3

I just found this again, searching for completed Twilight stories. The layout is a bit hard to read- the white-on-white part is literally impossible ;] Seriously. I think you'll see what I mean when you take a look. Funny story- I'm halfway through my first semester of Basic Automechanics!

This is such an amazing one-shot! (:

omgee!!! this has to be one of the cutest imprint stories i've read.
A M A Z I N G!1 <3

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is sooo awesome <3 <3 <3 And not just because of the amazing main character. I love the way Jake was described in the beginning- his stage in life was very clear and well-described. The way he described the imprinting was pretty freakin perfect. Now the driver...that part was a bit confusing. At first, I was positive he was going to get a 20 thrown at him and a big "fuck off". But then there was a sudden burst of niceness, and I was thinking "WHAAAAT o.O" And it didn't really make sense. But I guess in an extremely random way, it shows that the main character has a heart. Maybe if you wrote that "her eyes softened at the picture" or something like that?

There weren't any major spelling or grammatical errors that I could find, and I breezed through the story fairly smoothly. Thanks so much for the one-shot!!!!!!!!!!!!