Good update :)
March 30th, 2011 at 03:06am
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You should totally put more of Nick's point of view!March 24th, 2011 at 03:34am
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I hate it when in stories, the main character is being tormented for no reason, and there isnt anything they can do about it. Its very good, but that is very irritating. Not that you should change that by any means. Im just saying.March 23rd, 2011 at 03:34pm
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I just got all my storie edited by someone who knows what they are doing.March 23rd, 2011 at 05:08am
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Thank you! I always think my stories suck! I didn't say you were a grammar Nazi! (I am! One time we were doing reports on a book called "Wrinkle In Time" and one kid titled his report "Tinkle in time" it was funny.) I also re-edited my other chapter and I found 4 or 5 mistakes in it! wowza!March 22nd, 2011 at 06:04am
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I am not a grammar Nazi! Haha and I do enjoy this chapter better. Their relationship is interesting, because I think Nick actually does like her, and she cannot stand him. I love sarcastic characters, and you totally pulled that off with Nick. Keep writing!March 22nd, 2011 at 05:58am
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Oh, I know My grammar is quite bad. But mostly It is my keyboard! the keys are heavyset so it is a pain to write with!March 22nd, 2011 at 03:53am
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Stories do go by quickly :) I feel the same when I write. I do enjoy this, but I'm very OCD when it comes to grammar, and most of yours isn't correct.. That's the only flaw I can find right now. (: Please write more!March 22nd, 2011 at 02:36am
