Someone's Precious - Comments

Aw, those two are just so cute. <3 Rahab is just so... Adorable and just fdjklajf I want to hug her and make everything all better, the poor baby. I have a feeling Logan will do that for her, however.

Since you're just moving things along in this chapter I don't have much to say...moving on to chapter four...

WAIT! One thing I forgot to mention - new banner is TO DIE for. Did you make that? DID YOU DID YOU I AM SO JEALOUS RIGHT NAO. It's so gorgeous.

Anyway. Awwwww, you had me almost in tears by the end of chapter four. It was so saaaaaad. :(((( Poor Rahab! She's...*sobs*

I can't wait for the next update, love. Truly.

Okay, as I told you before in your other oh-so-amazing X-Men fanfic, I'm not one much for fan-fiction. But, love, you have me mesmerized once again! From the awesome layout to the pretty banner to the entrancing summary to the chapter introducing us to the introduction.

I do hope to read more of this fantastic story of yours, missy! I'm off to finish the next chapter. <3

This is an awesome story and to tell you the truth, I can imagine this happening in the movies and the comics! Logan just seems to attract the gals doesn't he? XD

The layout is simple and it doesn't pull from the story. I like it.

Your descriptions and choice of words are completely fantastic.
I could see everything in my head vividly as I read and I adored it.

I'm certainly loving this story. I would love to read more, darling.

I'm loving this story. Keep up the good work!

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I can't even BEGIN to describe how AMAZING that was!!! gkjdaslf;j;lkdsjflads

1. I love your writing. lovelovelovelovelovelovelove. You have so much vivid detail, I could imagine every bit.
2. I hate that family. Your writing conveys such emotion! ::FRICKIN' CHEESE:
3. THAT LAST PARAGRAPH WAS FANTASTIC. I don't know why I'm freaking over this entire thing. OH WAIT YEAH I DO 'CAUSE IT'S AMAZING THAT'S WHY.

One tiny little drawback, love. The new layout made me sort of dizzy. Of course, it could be the fact that I'm wearing glasses after a long period of contacts.

FIRSTY OH YEAH

Anyway, I love this, as I do you. Even though it was short, it packed quite a bit of emotion. I like your writing style, of course. Though, you tend to go off into run-on sentences a few times. This entire chapter's making me want more. Write more soon, love?

Uhm, oh and I love the layout. <3