Rhythm of Love - Comments

  • Shall We Run?

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    I liked it. There was a lot of detail and no mistakes that I could see. Good job so far! The layout is beautiful <3 I’m definitely a fan. Fo’ real though, the descriptions are fantastic. I’ll read the rest and then move onto the sequel :3
    November 22nd, 2011 at 03:38am
  • WatchingGravity.

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    I think I wanna cry now. ): ): ):
    November 19th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • Estella Marie

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    Why you no update? O.O

    I really really really like this. Like, I've seen a ton of bandfics, but this is like... an original band fiction :O I love the drama and issues between Nora, Alex, and Eli and I'M SO SAD! WHY ARE YOU KILLING HIM?! TT~TT

    You and Sukawaii are evil TT~TT But this is really good<3333333333 I hope you continue :D
    August 17th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • WatchingGravity.

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    UPDATE. (:
    Pretty please?
    July 19th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Last Friday Night

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    I usually never read stories here on mibba, but I love this one. I definatley subscribed.
    May 23rd, 2011 at 06:16am
  • WatchingGravity.

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    Awe - this is really cute. I definetly am a fan.
    I enjoy how you wirte really simply, but in an addictive way.
    Keep it up! & please update soon.
    May 3rd, 2011 at 04:52am
  • Jane Porter.

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    So far, I absolutely adore this story, it's fantastic!

    The layout is lovely, the colours go together very well and the image suits the story very well.

    Your imagery and descriptions are very good and I enjoyed reading.

    Good job, I will definitely be reading more!
    May 1st, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • Painter's Dream

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    The layout is beautiful <33
    I like the opening sentence(s) in the first chapter c:Colors exploded in the daytime sky.

    I immediately thought of fireworks :P
    Which I just happen to love <3
    I like the imagery and description you put in this and the title…<33
    Rhythm of Love is my favorite song :)
    I should really read more xD
    Update soon :)
    May 1st, 2011 at 07:44pm
  • alwaysallforyou

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    I like it so far. Going to read the rest later.(:
    April 21st, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • Rain_2010

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    Well first I love to say that your layout is wonderful <3

    While I was reading, I saw short chapters and then long chapters
    Which I enjoyed reading alot, I love the balance.
    I did also enjoy the balance of dialogue and descriptions.

    I do also love your writing style
    I can't wait for more dear

    Keep up the good work

    <3
    April 4th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • VandaliaLaRue

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    Long yet short chapters at the same time, I enjoyed that. Really seemed like I was reading a lot, yet going so quickly. :) The story is perky, up-beat, mostly. I really like that. I also love that it's fairly unique. I've read a story just a little bit similar in your writing style, authored by my best friend Megan but she hasn't updated in quite some time. You're doing great though, keep up the good work! :)
    March 29th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • xBecomingxNumbx

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    Good job with your story so far! You used a lot of detail, even in the first sentence with the colors. It stinks that she has to leave :/ But I'm guessing that will play a big part in your story. The cliffhanger was good, it leaves you with curiosity which is important to draw readers in. Once again, great job on this!
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • visions_of_blasphemy

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    I like it so far. Having to leave like that must be hard, especially on someone so young. I'm definitely going to read the rest of the story later. Good job :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 03:00am
  • storystereo

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    Really good so far. I like it! ^_^
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:11am
  • Meghan Miraculous

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    I like it ;)

    Read mine?
    March 23rd, 2011 at 03:11am
  • Mikey James Way

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    I really really liked this. There was a lot of detail and no mistakes that I could point out! :D
    The story leaves you hanging... why did she leave? D:
    So that means I'm going to have to be watching this story for updates, lol. xD
    March 22nd, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • coast rider

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    I liked it. One question I had was, why did she have to leave? I like though, dispite the fact that she is leaving, the prologue had a spirit of hope. I could feel how I thought she felt. I also like how on your character page you used a picture of Alex Pettyfer for Noah. I love that guy :)
    March 22nd, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • beautiful disaster;

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    Awe, that's sad how she has to leave. :/ I liked the detail you used to describe the first paragraph, it was really amazing. Very descriptive, I loved it. I liked how she was more positive towarda the end of the day(:
    March 22nd, 2011 at 03:01am