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  • Painter's Dream

    Painter's Dream (200)

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    First Impression: Its an OHSHC story no doubt :D

    Layout: The layout was simplistically beautiful. I love how it contrasted with the banner :3

    Details: Very detailed. I like that. The imagery was really nice and I loved the mental image I got while reading this :)

    Plot: The plot is really good. Most OHSHC leave out details but yours didn't

    Overall it was really good :)
    April 21st, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • Ed is Fun Size

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    Tis cute!
    March 26th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • Dragon Tamer Luna

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    <3 That was so funny and cute, well written too. I'm already loving your characters. Lol. Now it'll be Ayako-chan's turn to shine. :3
    March 24th, 2011 at 02:16pm
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