So here it is finally... My promis of story feedback (: haha
I thought this was cute, and considering it had to be squashed into a short story, well written. I adore Caspian (Ben Batnes :O)... And I dont think I've ever finished a whole movie fiction but this was good (: I definitely didn't get bored. I like how Loly became Susan... And then to not complicate things, she stated in Narnia (: as a QUEEN! Haha
I thought this was cute, and considering it had to be squashed into a short story, well written. I adore Caspian (Ben Batnes :O)... And I dont think I've ever finished a whole movie fiction but this was good (: I definitely didn't get bored. I like how Loly became Susan... And then to not complicate things, she stated in Narnia (: as a QUEEN! Haha
Awesome. I'll try to read some more now soon....