Don't You Cry No More - Comments

Interesting concept. I'm assuming you wrote this before we learned what John told Dean, and taking that into consideration, you handled it quite well. I think some of the dialogue was a little out of character, but when things heated up it all seemed natural. It would have to be something really big to drive a rift like that between the boys.

Very Nice! I'm actually familiar with the show. Four of my best friends are obsessive, so I know about the main characters and such. (:

Your score:

8/10 Originality (Is your storyline original?)
10/10 Correct Grammar/Spelling
8/10 Compatiblity with the song (Does the plotline fit with your song of choice?)
10/10 Appropriateness (Does it follow the rules?)
9/10 Character Development (Do your characters stay the same throughout the story?)
9.5/10 Flow (Do you use transitions?)
9.5/10 Format (Does it stay consistant throughout?)
8.5/10 Layout (Is your font easy to read?)

TOTAL: 72.5 /80

Very nice!

I wish there were like buttons on this site lol cuz then I would press it ^_^