Daisy in Bloom - Comments

That was kind of scary, not gonna lie. From the layout and title, I wasn't expecting that story, so it was really interesting reading it. I loved the layout though, that picture is gorgeous and I like how the whole background is white.

Your descriptions are really lovely. I was able to picture everything in my mind and then some, which was great. You captured a few moments in time perfectly, and described them in really amazing detail.

I almost wish this story went on, so we could see who this guy/thing is and what he’s going to do to her, but I also like that you kept it as a one-shot. It kept the mystery in the story really well.

Nice job!

You should make this a full length!!!!

keeeeeepppppp iiiiiittttttt !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

Intrigueing.....I love the pace and description...it almost leaves the reader hanging, our mouths watering for more. Defently a keeper ;)

keep! most definitely :)
enchanting.

Keeep!! Yes, I meant to put in three e's.

You're a very good writer; I enjoy all of your descriptive words. (: Just a heads up, though, when using a hyphen "-" you should extend it by holding down alt and pressing 0151. It does this "—" and just makes it look better and more professional.
Only a suggestion. (:
Keep it up!

Keep. Definitely. :)

AMAZINGGG.