He's An Addiction - Comments

Keep! I feel you have enough to construct a story out of. Enough characters, a decent conflict and maybe a side plot to :)

Description was beautiful and I felt when I read about Asher's razor sharp touch that you were right, and that was the only way he would or coulc plausibly feel. Was I wrong to think that it symbolised his character?

One mistake (I believe). Asher calls your MC (name, unknown =/ ) 'articulant' as opposed to 'articulate'

that was amazing!
im shocked no one else has commented, they don't know what they're missing out on
i really hope you do decide to continue it