I thought this was hilarious. I loved this. c: I agree with two comments above; I thought that they went at it too lol. But I didn't mentally throw up. (:
I loved it. You totally based the story off of the song and I appreciate that. It was very well written too. AND...you used my name...Yay!! And I was a Sharp! Double Yay!! Haha. Very good work. Good luck.