The Different Shades of Red - Comments

more please
Felix is just too much, he's hilariously corny and dirtyminded, i like it
I'm glad you make Evelyn and Jane friends
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you updated! yay!! i have to say that this chapter is my favorite so far and the only why i don't comment about my fave part of the chapter is because EVERYTHING is my fave part :)

Hhaha i love Felix's bluntness! i loved this chapter specially because you gave some insight of a certain Volturi member(Sulpicia) that bearly is mention in most fanfics. Last but not least my fave part of this chapter was:
“I knew I’d like you for more than your perfectly shaped ass” Felix said with a smirk making Evelyn laugh. “You are the first to agree with me”
“Oh? That’s hard to believe. She surprised me when she called my maker a savage”
“He was dumb wasn’t he?”
“No.” Evelyn expression hardens. “He was really intelligent but cruel”
“You just say that because you had a relation with him” Felix says as he walks down another set of stairs.
“I didn’t fuck him”
“It proves my point” Evelyn looks to Felix that just smirked. “He was really dumb”.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

She was about to respond when Felix laughed.
“That’s great news! I hate killing pretty females” He said making the tallest vampire curse under his breath something about the problems he would create again. Felix simply ignored him and walked to Evelyn. “I’m Felix”. -->My fave part of this chapter, aww i loved it.
Volturi saves the day yay!!
Can't wait for the next one :)

I can't wait for Felix to make his appearance in the story :D
Hope you update soon!

Ok so im the first comment YAY!! Anyway i just have tiny tiny request for you.
I've noticed that there's no characters description box, and i LOVE you forever if you could atleast show me and other readers how Evie looks like even though i imagined her like a fabulous redhead for 2 reasons:
1.The title and the picture of the story.
2.Ginger hair is the most unique and beautiful hair color EVER (im aware that reason number 2 doesn't count but i just had to say it).
Btw did you know approximately 1% to 2% of the human population has red hair. so exclusive right?
I wish a i was a ginger :( Anyway without making myself look like a babbling fool any longer mylady. Hope you take this suggestion into consideration. Bye :)