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  • akanevampire19

    akanevampire19 (100)

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    I like the story! I want to read more! =)
    September 15th, 2011 at 12:34am
  • LifeRecordedInWords

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    I likeee :3
    September 12th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • Yella

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    It is good. And i like the names they're so different[= Just one thing: capitalize. You seemed to have skipped that a lot esp. In the 1st chapter
    August 28th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • A Heart Of Flames

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    This is really good, I only ask that you put more into your chapters!
    August 27th, 2011 at 05:36am
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