Awww! I love this! It's so sweet, and the way you wrote David was so perfect! The whole thing is just perfect. This story made me smile like a loon! <3
(I know I'm forever and a day late on this, but you can go read my note on the contest wall for more clarification) So I really liked this story. I've got no idea who these people are, but I'm a sucker for a well written band-fic no matter what, so I don't care that I don't know who they are. I love how Sarah had that tough exterior that she had a hard time getting rid of. And the fact that she seems so vulnerable because of that makes it so much better. The way David was on the phone was really great too. It was like he totally understood that she was having a hard time admitting her feelings and knew exactly how to make her feel better. I just really did like this story a lot overall. Great job!
Absolutely sweet and I could really relate to a few parts. Nicely written, excellent grammar and spelling. Good job on the story! Keep up the good writing! WIIII!