The Exploder - Comments

OK, seriously... I have never read anything like this before. And now I honestly, have no idea why. This was brilliant. I loved how you described everything, and I felt so bad for the Explorer when all those vehicles called him names, but I couldn't help but laugh when they called him; Lard Bumper. Oh that poor Explorer. <3

I love how you gave him such feeling like a human, how he was desperate for attention, and if another 'driver' didn't buy him, he would bawl out his windshield wiper fluid out. It made me want to take him in, and for me to be his driver.

And as Sierra Kusterbeck said, it was awesome the way you gave each vehicle a different personality that went well with what model they were.

Overall, this was amazing, and absolutely genius! I enjoyed it a lot. (: To see what a vehicle is thinking and all that.

Ohmigosh I love this a ridiculous amount.

I love how you created the world of cars, and gave each of the vehicles a distinct personality that went well with the kind of vehicle that they are. I also love how you took something like going to a mechanic and made it as if they were going to a doctor/surgeon... although I suppose for cars it is exactly like that.

You did a fantastic job with this.