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I'd Give My All - Comments
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SWEET!!!!December 11th, 2012 at 08:16pm
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I just read this with the song 'Someone like you' by Adele.
Amazing story, depressing but love isn't all rainbows & butterflies.July 5th, 2011 at 05:35pm -
i love love loved this. <3March 28th, 2011 at 04:36am
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Sorry for this comment but I have to say I fucking loved it ^_^March 27th, 2011 at 05:27pm
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I'm sad but still happy..... You got to let us now if she'll be happy one day :) If not with Matt maybe with Bri hehe :DMarch 27th, 2011 at 05:26pm
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Aww I'm sad, I really wish she end up with Matt. Hopefully their will be a sequel and she will end up with him. I can't wait.March 26th, 2011 at 07:23pm
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OMG I freaking teared up when she had to watch both of her best friends get married while she is the on the side.
Man this story really got me emotional! T^T
I feel like just curling up and crying my eyes out for Katie because she saw the love of her life drive off with her best friend Nikki....not her.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE THINK ABOUT MAKING A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Because Katie deserve a happy ending too!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDMarch 26th, 2011 at 03:36am -
I'm feel pity for her... but I know she'll let Matt be happy even though she has to live with the thought of never owning his heart.
Loved the updates^^March 25th, 2011 at 02:16am -
YAY for updates <3 I feel so bad for katie, she told her feelings to Matt and he disregarded them. I understand how she feels at the moment. I hope for a update and I do hope you make a sequel.March 24th, 2011 at 11:48pm
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Wow so the wedding day is getting closer and Katie is more devastated even more.
So Matt has been avoiding her since she confessed her feelings to him.
Since the only people that seem worry about her is Brian and the rest while Matt and Nikki are oblivious because of their upcoming wedding and pregnancy.
Man Jimmy and Brian must really feel bad for her because she has been in love with Matt ever since they were kids and now she has to watch him get married and start a family with someone else.
I feel so depressed now......Katie is all alone now.
You should definitely make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDMarch 24th, 2011 at 10:40pm -
I can't believe the story is almost over =( I hope you make a sequel!! Hope you up-date again soon.March 24th, 2011 at 10:18pm
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She finally told Matt she loved him, then finds out Nikki is pregnant. I feel bad for her! =( Can't wait to see what's going to happen. Hope you up-date again soon!March 24th, 2011 at 09:52pm
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Cant wait for the next update <3March 24th, 2011 at 03:10pm
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DAMN this story has really broken my heart.
Even though she finally confessed her feelings to her, he still rejects her.
Can't he see that he completely broke her!!!!???
Maybe Nikki isn't all that innocent!!!!! Wouldn't that be a shocker!
Damn that sucks big time, them getting married and having a child on the way.
Maybe Katie could leave after they get because seeing them all lovey dovey will definitely kill whats left of her after Matt rejected her.
Like have start over with no Matt and Nikki, then he finds her!!!!
THERE IS SO MUCH ANGST IN THIS STORY!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!March 24th, 2011 at 08:56am -
DAMN IT! Why did she have to be pregnant.March 24th, 2011 at 08:44am
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I'm seriously feeling bad for her... being in love with someone so out of reach:(
I hope Nikki isn't going to fuck things up with Matt.... I don't know what to say I'm confused on who's side I am :)
Great update^^March 24th, 2011 at 12:49am -
LOVE THIS! Please update soon!!!March 23rd, 2011 at 07:59pm
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Damn that a very complicated predicament she got herself into.... being best friends with both of them...
I do hope everything works out :D
Love this ^^March 23rd, 2011 at 05:18am -
1. you're an amazing writer.
2. it has matt in it
3. i love you
4. THIS STORY IS SO GOOD, I LOVE YOUR PLOT. <3March 23rd, 2011 at 04:55am
Won’t lie, I’m not an A7X fan so I don’t know much about the fandom or the band members outside of how other people portray them. So I treated this like it was an original fiction from the get-go, and it worked out. You were detailed and thorough in your characters, even the boys, so I never felt like I didn’t get a good grasp on anyone. I really appreciated that you treated them like original characters rather than characters that your readers should just know. A lot of fanfiction writers fall into that trap and you definitely did not.
The storyline, in general, was so, so sad. The romantic in me definitely hoped that maybe Matt would return the feelings and have this life-changing epiphany but then I knew it’d break Nikki’s heart and I definitely knew it wasn’t happening when Matt revealed that Nikki was also pregnant. In the end, I was actually glad that he didn’t leave Nikki and he was happy. As mean as it sounds, I also really liked that Katie’s feelings stayed consistent throughout and it ended with a really bittersweet message that you don’t always get what you want, no matter how much you want it. I like to think that after Matt and Nikki rode off into the sunset, Katie finally found her someone.
As for errors, you didn’t really have any except instead of ‘would’ve’, ‘should’ve’ or ‘could;ve’ you would type “would of” / “should of” / “could of”—which is actually a common mistake because they sound the same, but definitely improper. What you were aiming for was the contractions of ‘would have’, ‘should have’, ‘could have’ so it’s definitely ’ve and not of. You had a couple of dialogue tag errors, but nothing that hindered the flow or made it distracting to read. Other than that, you didn’t even have errors and your prose was very well-done. Simple, underrated, and very pleasant for me. It kept the focus on the story.
So all in all, very nice story!