this story is awesome! the coincidence wuz that we're studying about the holocaust in our history class, so i thought maybe i knew you, but i dont no. keep up the great work.
Squeeness! <3 Dude, that was superfatanbulousticular! =D And yeah, that's a word now. I was like, Robert, Bob? Then I was like Frank, "why is Bob crying? WAIT! Ray's a jew! Knew that..."
From now on, silence will be sacred. The shocking bouts of utter silence will be valued. Noise will soon erupt everywhere and pierce the silence and shatter the eardrums of all. Flames will overtake the orderly stores and houses and the people will be ripped away from all that they knew. No complaints, no objections, and no questions.
Numbing silence; rest in peace.
WHY DOES THIS STORY ONLY HAVE ONE COMMENT? That makes me really quite angry. It's fanbloodytastic.
There's gonna be more, yes? They're better be.
I'd like to leave a comment more worthy but I'm in too much of a spazz.
You're a terrific writer, it's a terrific story, and I can't wait for more
I looove it. (I already read it, but NOT the point).
You are fantabulous. Seriously. I love the detail and all that stuff. Even the not calling Ray and Bob by their nicknames was great. It added an affect.
I truly love it and can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the dedication, love.
your a really good writer guuurl.
<3bri