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Author [Cherrycoke12]
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Samantha Irene.
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It's a nice story, but I feel like your plot progression is too quick! Spend more time on some things, especially your characters and their feelings, and then the plot will occur naturally.
November 1st, 2011 at 04:13am
ADUBFanForever
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i adore this story! update soon (:
June 18th, 2011 at 06:00pm
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