Bahahaah I loved this chapter a lot. I have two favorite parts in the last two the first one from chp. 16 “Don't leave me. The bras are scary,” Jack whimpered. “You're such a derp,” Arachne stated before pulling him up off the floor and leaving the store. And I love how you used the word derp (: is that even a real word?? Also from chp 17 was “Mmm, you smell nice,” Arachne complimented. “That's not creepy at all,” Matt stated sarcastically.
Bahahaah I loved this chapter a lot. I have two favorite parts in the last two the first one from chp. 16 “Don't leave me. The bras are scary,” Jack whimpered. “You're such a derp,” Arachne stated before pulling him up off the floor and leaving the store. And I love how you used the word derp (: is that even a real word?? Also from chp 17 was “Mmm, you smell nice,” Arachne complimented. “That's not creepy at all,” Matt stated sarcastically.
haha tis chapter was fuckin hilarious altho when matt said the l word an she freaked poor girl an they only went on one date so far it was really hilarious when jack punched alex in the back of the head though XD cant wait for the next update !!!
So um can we kill Alex off please? He's a total douche in this and he makes me mad lol. But aw aw aw Matt and Arachne need to become an official couple because they're far too perfect together goodness! Um yep, I hope you update really soon!
Great story! Do you think you can send me the link to the video in chapter 14? I couldn't find it anywhere :'o. If you could, that would be great! Can't wait for the net update :)!
I think something should happen between Jack and his sister. I mean after the whole rape thing Jack did absolutely nothing and it really pissed me off! He should have gotten mad or beat up Alex because he fucking deserved it!