Wow. 0.0 I have nothing to say to the end of that.. except Wow. But I will anyway. I can't believe Gerard would do that. I mean,, yeah, i knew he would, but I'm mad he lied about it. Flat out lied. Fuckin' bitch.
you know. i think Gerard is really just trying to help Frank, because he honestly think he's bad for him, and he would be better off without him... but at the same time, he said he did it for Maria... so, idk what to think. if he did it for Maria, I hate his f***king guts. Now, Maria...I REALLY HATE HER. the end. that is ALL I am gonna have myself write about her, because my name is Maria...and it feels weird saying I hate myself...lol
So I finally got around to reading this whole story again today because I love it so much, it sort of makes me hate Gerard though -_- I mean I understand his reasoning, I guess, Frank put him through so much shit and I can imgagine that he feels guilty seeing as Frank made him the reason for his disorder, but still, I don't see how anyone could have the heart to do that no matter how much they went through. And at least if he is going to fall for Maria he could show his affection for her when Frank couldn't see it not while he was holding Frank -_- It made me so sad, I felt so much sympathy for them both during this whole story. And Mitch, don't get me started on Mitch the Bitch, he makes me sick D: Anyway, it was amazing none the less (: One of my favorites, I can't wait to read the sequel.
this story was amazing.... it's the reason i'll probably fail my history test tomorrw..... but it was so well written, and captivating, and immensily sad..... at the end I was like "Oh Hell NO...." but then i was like "Yea Sequal!!" ... so that's where i'm headed now.....
but this was an absolutley stunning piece..... i really loved reading it.... keep up the good work =)
Hai I know you finished this story quite a while ago now but I only just found it last night and I've been reading it pretty much non stop and now..I'm finished. haha This is the first story of yours that I've read that's finished. You really have a talent for writing, the plot, the characters..it was all amazingly written and thought out. I really liked how you introduced Gerard P.OV.'s, it gave the story more depth and helped me to understand how Gerard really felt. :] Also, I wanted to say good job on keeping the characters personalities fully intact. II've notcied that sometimes people forget the original meaning behind their thought for the story and the characters just get kinda lost..if you know what I mean.
The only thing I should admit that I didn't like was the ending...Once again it was just as well written as the rest of the story, heck it even made me cry..a lot, haha But I like a few others have stated...Maria is eviiiiiil...I liked her at first but..you know, after what happened in chapter 37, NO THANKS! In the last chapter when Gerard told Frankie that Maria was on her way back to Chicago..(that made me really happy ^_^)..I figured Gerard was still leaving Frank but I was happy thinking that atleast he wouldn't be going back to her..*shudders* But anywho, your ending so it's your choice. haha But one good thing about the ending is that it really pushes me into wanting a sequal!! I think if you were up for it and wanted to, a sequal to this would be awesome..maybe then you could kill of Maria. haha
Anywho, thanks so much for this story. I hope my comment doesn't bore you haha I just thought seeing as I finished I may aswell express my thoughts and what not. :] Goodluck with your writing. :]
Okay so...I'm crying like a baby also. It was so freaking sad at the end. I hate Maria with a passion she should literally go die [exuse the harshness].
Anyways amazing story very well written *envious*...I just kind of wish that didn't happen to Frank...
Hope you write a sequal, I honestly would LOVE to see where it goes.
ow... im crying like a little baby... i´ve read the whole story... how could gee done that? and maria´s a bitch... (sorry for the word)... i just cant believe it ended like that...
OK, so I hated Maria when she slept with Gee, but now I hate her with a passion! How could Gee do that for her? And then her say its 'the right thing'?!?! GAh!! I hope you do write a sequel. Great story xoxo