Car Accident - Comments

Comment swap brought mw here today.I would first like to say that you need to break up your paragraphs more.. its way too hard to read in the small font. as for the story its really raw and i think its great. keep writing but please break up the paragphs more so it can be eaily read :)

Comment swap brought mw here today.I would first like to say that you need to break up your paragraphs more.. its way too hard to read in the small font. as for the story its really raw and i think its great. keep writing but please break up the paragphs more so it can be eaily read :)

Comment swap brought mw here today.I would first like to say that you need to break up your paragraphs more.. its way too hard to read in the small font. as for the story its really raw and i think its great. keep writing but please break up the paragphs more so it can be eaily read :)

Comment swap brought mw here today.I would first like to say that you need to break up your paragraphs more.. its way too hard to read in the small font. as for the story its really raw and i think its great. keep writing but please break up the paragphs more so it can be eaily read :)