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  • autumnfreakshow

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    Oo they are so going to get caught soon...
    and i am now wondering what she was actually laying on too...after reading some other comments...
    holy cow what if they get caught during dinner...o.o intense

    loved this update..
    great job :]
    April 8th, 2011 at 10:14am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Sexy time with Zacky at VU!!
    Love it!!
    More soon please!!
    April 8th, 2011 at 07:38am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Can't wait for more! <3
    April 8th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • burning bright.

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    Those two are so asking to be caught, and it's great!
    April 8th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • pixiedusttt.

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    ohhh....
    I'm so worried that they're gonna get caught...
    what if when they're at the restaurant Carson or Gena wonder what's taking them so long and go in to check on them?
    what then?
    I feel really bad for Carson too... </3
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    April 8th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Another great update
    . .. I'm getting worried that they are going to get caught soon
    and that's not good for anyone
    <3 Michele
    April 7th, 2011 at 07:05pm
  • tigga14

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    oooooooooooooooooo lol loved it !! plz keep updating :D soon!!!! XD
    April 7th, 2011 at 07:01pm
  • Issues

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    I wonder what she was laying on....
    The chapter was really good and I'm exited to find out what happens next.
    I can't wait for the next update. :)
    April 7th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • estevezz

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    let me guess, it wasn't a pen it was a phone!
    Thanks for updating so often, I just love ur stories!! Keep up the good work!
    April 7th, 2011 at 11:51am
  • cruciatus.

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    That has to have been one of the sexiest smut scenes I have ever read in any of your stories. For some reason, the idea of Zacky just taking her like that was just....tehe Yeah. It was hot. That's pretty much all I can say for this chapter. Shocked It was just so...amazing. tehe
    April 7th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    I have a feeling that whatever was behind wasn't a pen. Dx
    April 7th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    April 7th, 2011 at 06:05am
  • bob morley

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    Okay.
    I hate Gena. And I hate Carson.
    I don't know why.
    And Scarlett needs to dump Carson and be with Zacky.
    All right.
    That's what I have to say.
    I like the story! :)
    April 7th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    was it really jsut a pen that wad under her back? im gonna bet you anything it was his phone and she ended up calling gena or carson and they answered and heard them going at it. just a thought that owuld make things interesting.
    April 7th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • angy_something

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    Ohhhhhh if it would have been me with Gena i would have told her to fuck off
    April 7th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    I'd say give him to Gena but well that won't work. LOL
    April 7th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • pixiedusttt.

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    awww
    poor Carson!
    He's such a good fiancé but he's so clueless! :P
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    April 6th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    love it, can't wait for the next one <3
    April 6th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • xohunnyxo

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    Carson is so nice but clueless.. I feel bad for him lol.
    April 6th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • Issues

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    *Cue dramatic music!*
    I think some drama is going to start soon. :O
    I really liked he chapter, it was really interesting. :)
    Please update soon.
    April 6th, 2011 at 04:29pm
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