Passion - Comments

I loved this story! Firstly, because it involved baseball, which is a definite plus in my books. And also the storyline was great! Oh, and I basically want every single one of her outfits... Time to read the sequel! :-D

I LOVED THIS!! The story was awesome but and I hate to say it i didn't like the ending. Why did she have to leave? Why couldn't her and carter get together? Why couldn't she get her happily ever after?

Please write more Its a really awesome story!!! =)

You have a really interesting idea, but your writing needs some work. For starters, you don't use the same tense all the time, you switch between past and present. Also, sometimes you don't use the right word, like there instead of their. Last, many of your words are misspelled sometimes to the point to changing the meaning of the sentences. And make sure you read your sentences to see if they make sense, many of them don't. It helps me to have a friend read it first. Keep writing.

Haha oops, was kidda in a rush, but thank you(:

Umm. Captain* Hahaha sorry, it took me a while to realise what you meant at first soo just thought i should tell you :P I like the story by the way. Carter is so cute :)

Yeah for the update! =)

Love your story!! =) Please update soon.

This story is already kickass can't wait til the next chapter!