Run on for a Long Time - Comments

Aw, that was such an amazing ending :D
And they were blessed with a baby boy.....the new generation of the Saints
Another sequel would seem really redundant though
The guys who were after eliza were killed in the prequel
And the assasin that was hired and the one who hired him is now dead too, killed in the sequel
I really loved this story though, amazing ending :D

Ps. I found one last mistake in this chapter. Kaitlyn smiled, I can help you with that." She pulled a box out of her purse and handed it to Eliza. -> you missed quotes there

That is so sweet. :) an adorable son. Damn now I want his babies even more.

Congrats on completing your sequel!!

Another sequel right?
Sorry I couldn't comment a lot more, it said my subscription was inactive whatever the hell that means.
But I loved alll of it. I read it all yesterday haha.
:)

Yayyayya! Happy story. I think someone should get shot just to balance it out!

I'm looking foreword to more updates.......!!!!

So, they finally got rid of Antonia
Well looks like they don't have any more problems
At least I don't know of anyone who would want to harm them
And now Eliza and Murphy can finally start planning everything for the wedding
And she can finally tell him that she's indeed pregnant
I'm really looking for more
Hope you update soon :)

Ps. I found two mistakes.
"Now, let's get out of here before someone calls the cops. -> you missed the qotes at the end; this was in chapter 20

Then again....it is you, so maybe I wouldn't of." -> did you mean wouldn't have; this was in chapte 21

Damn William Defoe is good at everything.

I had really thought that Antonia would try to deny it more that she hired someone
But after she said 'she killed my brother' she admitted it that she did hire a person
And then she had the nerve to use the whole 'you don't mean that' shit
Guess they are going to follow Antonia now
And then, Eliza wouldn't have to worry about someone else being hired
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

<3 badass.

Must have been quite the shock to hear that about her girlfriend
But that Antonia would do that to Kaitlyn, just killing her daughter
Tommy's death was in a way self defence
Eliza would have been dead if the other hadn't come and Tommy had to die to ensure Eliza's safety
So, Eliza's pregnant
Yay for a little Saint's baby
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)

awesome. yeeaahh :)

Hm, it's probably better that they get rid of the source of the problem
But when it's all taken care of, they pobbly should tell Eliza who was behind it
I wonder though what Eliza's mother will do
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

secrecy...? do I feel something about to go wrong? yes, I do.

Haha, seems like Connor was right when he said the rope would come in handy xD
And Eliza.....she seemed reaaaally bored..how can one person be soo bored?
She would have nearly cut her hair
At least she figured out that she could bake some more muffins xD
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Haha, the rope, Connor's rope....that part totally cracked me up xD
Aw, I think that Connor really forgot though that she had been shot right there
He just needs to be more careful with stufflike that as Eliza has a tendency to get hurt
Well, hopefully the four will be able to find at leat anything that'll lead them to the guy that's on Eliza's tail
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

Oha, she went onto a baking spree there
Me hungry now xD
Aw, she made Murphy want being a father
But he's right with it being too dangerous at the moment
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen
Hope you update soon :)

can i say... hungry?

At least Murphy took it quite well
I mean, he could have freaked out but he didn't
And it would probably be better of they don't tell the other just yet
But then again, if they knew then they would strengthen security for Eliza even more
As they had to protect two people at once
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

ahhahahaaaaahaha ten. haha. :)

Oh....so there is a possibilty that she might be pregnant
Hm, I wonder what Murphy's going to think
I mean, they are engaged to one another
But the fact that some maniac wants her death, would make this a really horrible situation to be pregnant
I really can't wait for more
Hope you update soon :)

AHHHHH! UHH. You can't leave it there >.< CANT I SAY!

I feel naughty because I didn't update today, but I still got to read yours. I promise extras tomorrow. fyi.