I think in the next chapter..yhu shud have them go hunting and they encount a little kid..whos laying by a dead body..her father or mothers carcus...and their shaking them..telling them to wake up! but their not waking up..They shout out to the kid and stuff...and yhu know what..email me...I think its to long to just sit here and type on the coments :)
How'd josh get out of the ties? I'm so confused. And when they ran out why didn't he grab his? Just saying..... anywho it's a great, exciting, fast-pased, weird..... I could go on, but nah. I like this story very much! It's the only one like it. :)