Mibba notifies us when a story we're subscribed to posts a sequel :) Just so you know. I wouldn't want to see you get banned or anything, because I really enjoyed this story.
just found this story and i love it, its so light and i'm happy to be reading it. the only issue I have and this is just like a helpful tip. instead of saying 'he seen me fall' you should try saying 'he saw me fall' it's just something too keep in mind. =)