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  • Trig-ger

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    its really good
    January 9th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • Sugar Pill

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    Aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <3
    April 8th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Nytestalker

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    That
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    So hot.
    If I had a penis.....

    Anywhoo.... Lolz. Great story guys.
    Sequel sounds amazing! Let me know!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 01:29am
  • Rachelish

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    How dare you get me hooked then make it over :(

    I think you definitely owe us a sequel :)
    April 1st, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    I likey.
    April 1st, 2011 at 06:21am
  • Rachelish

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    Shit, you update fast!! Haha I had to go back three chapters and it's only been like 24 hours!! not even that haha

    and yeah i thought that's what rylyn would do too :) great chapter/s
    April 1st, 2011 at 03:55am
  • Nytestalker

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    No, you only did that to make me cry.
    Jerkface.

    Just kidding. I love you :)
    April 1st, 2011 at 01:06am
  • Nytestalker

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    Awh! How could Kelan resist that??
    March 31st, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • Rachelish

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    Wow, new chapter, wooot!

    Love it, more please
    March 31st, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • Rachelish

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    Love this story heaps! =D

    As always I have my piece to add, in the first like 5 chapters you kept copy and pasting what was said at the end of the last chapter into the new chapter. Its annoying ;S I know its from a different POV but it doesn't serve a purpose, but im glad to see that it stopped =)

    You write the boys' smutt scenes really well and I'm might impressed!!

    Just remember, all i offer is my humble opinion and I hope you don't get offended because i really do like the story :)

    p.s I saw you comment on Nytestalker's profile and so I clicked yours and so I decided to read them :P blame her if you don't like my comments ;)
    March 31st, 2011 at 11:16am
  • Nytestalker

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    Awh, teasers are so cute though!
    March 31st, 2011 at 03:32am
  • Nytestalker

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    HAAA!
    Not very subtle are we Rylyn?
    March 31st, 2011 at 02:39am
  • Nytestalker

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    Do they have an easy button or something cause THAT WAS EASY.
    seriously Kelan, I bet you're going to be so much happier now.
    And clearly Rylyn is tree for you.
    March 30th, 2011 at 10:29pm
  • Lexaa_Lynn

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    I loooooooooove this!
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • Nytestalker

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    Ahhhhh! Finally! SOMEONE tells him he has to choose!
    March 30th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • Nytestalker

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    .......….............
    FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
    I can't even- no.
    March 30th, 2011 at 04:02am
  • Nytestalker

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    Well, my dad is a know it all and he gets on my nerves with all these plans about 'the future'. Like are we in a movie? Seriously. Anyway, Kelan kinda gets on my nerves the same way with the 'what if' questions. Like, we all know what you want bud. Just go for it.
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • Nytestalker

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    Now Rylyn is being stupid.
    And Kelan needs to choose already. For fucks sake.
    March 30th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • whattoputhere

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    NOOO. Kelan pissed me off. I was getting really angry until I realized... this is just a story... XD
    March 30th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    Kelan should hurry up and dump his girlfriend.
    March 29th, 2011 at 10:13pm
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