#first comment# AMAZING EPIC BRILLIANT GRAND (posh word that last one) WOW GREAT love it I need more I need your brain I tell you this a lot and it's not just because exams are coming up promise ok maybe a little lol anyhow (see not anyway any more) great story start love it so very very very (I am running out of space so going to cut to the chase) brilliant story excellent job but then you always do an excellent job ok bye well done