ok i can't really remember if i commented on the final chapter or not but i was going through my subscriptions and thought i'd give a final farewell comment even if it is extremely late: why?? why??? lol sorry my dramatic side gets the better of me sometimes :) but this story was really good. even though they never ended up together in the end i'm glad that the experience changed both their lives and that they will both continue to heal and get better..... also i'm glad you didn't kill the main character lol i know their probably isn't going to be a sequel but one can dream right? and this story just seems to be one of those rare ones that doesn't have an ending where they get together and live happily ever after but it still works out in a way because they are both going to grow and meet the person they will spend the rest of their life with (see how much i get attached to stories lol) i think an example of a story like this one would be Dear John. it was phenomenal and the ending of this story really reminds me of the book's ending anyway i've kept you hear long enough so go write some more amazing stories!
I AM SO SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED EARLIER D: AHHHHH but i'm so pissed Cynthia found out about the bet... What I really like is how you didn't make them get back together and have a ditzy happy ending (: And I love The Outsider's reference. Stay gold Ponyboy... I hope that you'll make another Rodrick story, this was absolutely amazing :)
First off, and this is coming from a critic and not a teenager, I think you did rather good for the sex part (: Slightly too fast for when Cynthia was blowing Rodrick, but otherwise it was good (: AND IS SASHA THE BITCH THAT RODRICK SLEPT WITH?? I AM GOING TO FUCKING STAB HER ONE DAY. *ahem* I feel that Cynthia is going to find out about the bet...
k;nvdkhpHYIpowqyufihpsafi9ayfhpaw9tfhjyaewhgvpaUF0g9wresbv WHY THE SHIT DID HE GO WITH HER????? Hope Cynthia doesn't find out :O I like how you added some humor with "OH GOD WHERE"S MY TOOTHBRUSH?!" That made me smile. oiuywr09eytrhfiwoaetyh. So pissed off at Rodrick. I cannot even begin to tell you -___-
Phone sex? :O AND I AM GOING TO KILL THAT BITCH. Just like I killed Tina and Katie in the episodes of Being Erica when they're with Devon -__- RODRICK BETTER NOT LET HIS DICK GET IN THE WAY OR I'LL MURDER HIM TOO.
Awwww Eddy seems like a sweet brother despite the fact that he and Cynthia haven’t seen each other for years. I probably would have blown up on my brother if he left me like Eddy did. But it’s not hard to understand why Cynthia wants to have a good relationship with him. I hope that she and Rodrick make up soon xx AND WHY DO I SEEM TO BE THE ONLY PERSON COMMENTING ON A REGULAR BASIS??
CYNTHIA BETTER ACCEPT HIS APOLOGY OR I WILL GO INTO THAT STORY AND MAKE HER <_< But yeah with the shit of losing her sister and all... Rodrick's comment was just... BLEAH. Even though Cynthia isn't looking forward to seeing Eddy, I'm quite curious to finally meet this man.
SEX SCENE :D *random spazz moment* ANYWAY. Cynthia's mom is such a bitch, why doesn't she take the time to talk to her? And Rodrick's comment is slightly understandable, I mean he just got a handjob, any guy would want to go all the way after that. I hope Cynthia gets better though...
Aww I'm glad that Rodrick wasn't too umm... Out of it to not recognize Cynthia and take advantage of her. I wish her family would have paid slightly more attention to her, but I guess they were so caught up in the grief of losing Miranda that they didn't pay much attention... can't wait for more (:
OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING :D I love Diary of a Wimpy Kid, seeing an fan fic is amazing, I love how Rodrick has a really sweet side, yet still has his tough bad boy image. I was flipping out the whole time I was reading this, especially when Rodrick was being super sweet (: Can't wait to see how he and Cynthia's relationship is gonna be since Miranda died ):