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I love how I can tell exactly what she's feeling by her motions (lips quivering) and simple thoughts (wondering if he'll come back or call). I've never been in a relationship myself, let alone been 'the other woman', but I could really feel the emotion. It broke my heart, but at the same time, it makes me wonder what kind of person the woman is. But I guess I'll never know. It's very well written! Good job.

You're such a good writer Jade-sama ^_^

This broke my heart. Really and truly. I feel a great amount of sympathy for this woman I barely know and it's incredible. The emotions in this were incredibly tangible and the way you left us haning, well, it made me just want to know more. Does he come/call back? Does he leave his husband/wife for her? (Though from the way her thought pattern trails it leads me to believe otherwise). Does his secret ever become exposed? This was amazing, really. Alot of detail, and room for the imagination, in so few words. You're an amazing writer, dearie. :)

Awe, wow. You make it where the reader most certainly wants to sympathize for the female and detest the male. It's a typical affair, however it is perfectly written from the woman's point of view. They all feel like this, even if none admit it. I like it. You're a great drabble writer :)

I really like this, it was sad and beautifull at the same time. i really think that this site needs more stories like this, and alot less fan-fics. Please keep writing. Oh, and i didnt notice any mistakes either.

I haven't read too many drabbles on this site, but I must say, this was good! It gave me a very brief glimpse into the life of someone who is in love with someone, but only being used for an affair. I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, and all in all, this was very well written. Good job :)