Chasing the Future - Comments

yeah so this needs an update

LE UPDATE OR I WILL FIND YOU

PRAISE THE LORD AND HARRY POTTER AND ICE-CREAM AND RAINBOWS AND UNICORNS AND EVERYTHING ELSE THAT IS FABULOUS IN THIS WORLD. HELL YEAH THIS STORY GOT UPDATED I AM SO EXCITED I JUST MIGHT VOMIT RAINBOWS AND POOP MARSHMALLOWS.

um.........................................what.

I love the witty dialogue you write for your characters! I snorted in laughter at this part: "...says the guy that got blond highlights and looked like a flaming homosexual."

And this one: "...she ever sexy with her greasy hair and mammoth armpits." You are so clever and funny and I'm so jealous. I might just go cry in the corner and tell my cat all my problems. He loves meeeee.

OMFG THIS. "“Daniel Cabrara! Broke up with you because he needed more time for Yu-Gi-Oh.” Duuuuude, I'm crYinG in laughter WHAT DA FUQ IS THIS.

Facebook is her witness, oh man, oh man. Nora is too funny! I love her really quite a lot <3 Oooh, Ana doesn't belong, woe is me, my lyfe my creyz, wah wah wah. Jokes, I can understand where she's coming from. But the second time you mentioned it, you could have used a synonym so it wasn't so repetitious. I'm just nit-picking here, tho, really, 'cos this story is pretty much flawless.

This was just so beautiful sdjfbksd I can't.
Dealing with them took the courage I never had and the strength I never would, and so they all collected behind my ribs in a graveyard of lost thoughts.

Noah was waiting outside her house? Awh, that's so adorable and his sloopy grin and awh awh awh fbkjsdfbjkbkebf ieghj gfkbdk <3 He is such an adorable drunk and he called her his princess and awh awh awh drunk noah is fun :D

HOT DAYUM. I was all geared up for a fabulous kiss FINALLY but no. He throws up in the f-cking neighbor's bushes. THAT IS SO RAVEN. I mean, uh, that is so...um, Noah. A perfect ending, of sorts.

AWH I'M IN YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTE I FEEL SO SPECIAL. Why am I yelling? I don't even know. Buuuuttt I love you and this story and I'll be waiting on my candy canes and yeah. Peace and turtles. xo.

goodness gracious.
I'm in love with Noah.
just because he's always finding the wrong time to throw up.
and he's adorable, I'll give him that.
and hilarious, I'll give him that, too.
and I guess the biggest reason is because he's a figment of your imagination.

please update soon?(-:

I love this story so much. Its amazingggg.

FOR THE LOVE OF HARRY POTTER, CAN THIS BE UPDATED PLEASE!?

Subscribing. I don't care when you last updated it. I really, really want to read more. I've never read an 8 chapter story straight through before. I'm intrigued. I love it.

WHAT. KIND. OF. HORRIBLE. QUESTION. IS THAT. TUR. DUH. KEN.

Gurl, you know I love this story. o: Okay, you might not have known, but that's not my fault! Or maybe it is, seeing as my computer had no internet for almost three weeks, and I couldn't get on Mibba for that long, or rather internet itself. But that still isn't my fault. It's the government, lmao.

But I do love this story. <3 I just had to read what I'd missed, and it has gotten so good. The hugs, the pats, the talks, and the subtle romance laced with the sadness and nervousness in your writing make me go craycray. And just typing that word makes me wanna stab a doll in its neck.

Your writing is beautiful as always. <3 I can't get enough, really. It's like... natural, or something. I can't describe it well, but it's good, really good. Please forgive me for not commenting for so long. Just know I'm looking forward to every word.

-Luna

I DO.
I LOVE THIS STORY OKAY.

urgh, their romance is explosively delicious.
he needs to fall for her, girl.
he really does.

please update soon! D:
I'M LOOKING FORAWRD TO MORE.

This story is amazing. This story is so different from the other stories on mibba. Usually there all about Avenged Sevenfold (which I love) but sometimes you just need a different story plot to read. And I'm glad I came across this one. Loveeeeeeee itttt!!!

This story is amazing. This story is so different from the other stories on mibba. Usually there all about Avenged Sevenfold (which I love) but sometimes you just need a different story plot to read. And I'm glad I came across this one. Loveeeeeeee itttt!!!

oh my goodness.
Anastasia and Noah are just so asdfkjhasldkjchalwejktrhaspdfocja.
their romance is deliciously adorable.
Update soon, please? c:

Your story is great. Detailed just enough to make it captivating and foreshadowing enough to keep you on your toes wondering exactly about her past and why she's running away from her home. It makes me think that her brother died or something. Or maybe her father died. She hasn't said anything about him just about her brother. I net the reason why she left is because of something that happened between him and her.

The layout is fabulous, the story line is incredibly engrossing. The awkardness Anastisia portrays is very real and believable so that's thumbs up! Noah seems like an interesting boy that might be dealing with something along the lines of family issues just like Ana, which is perfect.
They do possess attraction and I'm so amazed that I found this story!

Thumbs up and Kudos,
Monica!

The characters in this story are unbelievebly realistic and 3D. I already feel like I know everyone personally even though they're fictional and this story's only six chapters long! It's also stunningly well written. Usually I don't like things to have rather a few similies, metaphores and what have you but there's something about your style that draws me in. Like Paullina Simons or Alice Sebold, perhaps. I don't know how to phrase it but I think I'm already hooked on this story. Great work :)

Wow, I cannot believe that Noah puked on her after their small conversation. I mean, it is super believable since he had been drinking, but it is still gross. Very gross. But, I think that their encounter was very cute because she had made a friend… sort of. I guess you could count them as friends even though he might not remember talking to her.

Anyway, it sounds like Ana is sort of a stalker in the beginning of the second chapter since she knows how their second meeting is going to go down. That just sort of screams either stalker or obsessive to me.

I can’t believe that he didn’t remember her. But that’s super understandable since he was drunk at the time. Noah seems so oblivious to her disappointment that he was repaying her so quickly, and with money too. That part made me laugh.

Enough of my rambling that might not even make any sense. Even though I only read a few chapters, I think this is a wonderful story. I can tell that Noah and Ana’s relationship might just be an awkward one but I hope everything goes well between them. Wonderful job!

He’d offered to pay my fair anyways.
just a question, but isn't it fare? sorry, this stuff catches my attention a lot :\

but anyways, I really liked this update! Noah and Anastasia seriously have to get together.
legit.
ASDFGHJKL so yeah, please update soon!

MY MOTHER TIS NOT A PART OF MY LIFE ENOUGH TO HAVE A SAY.

But I'm commenting anyway ;D

So, I want to point out the basic, nobody-cares-about-it thing, and say your layout is awesome. Stories are always read better against dark layouts, in my opinion.

So, onward.
Your first chapter was really long, in my opinion. That's good and bad. I'll start off by saying that you have great grammar and spelling and DETAIL that I MUST subscribe and continue reading.

From there, the length of this first chapter blew my mind. I guess I'm too used to the short, prologue-y first chapters that introduce main characters a bit and give a tantalizing first glimpse of the major plot to the readers. Because this chapter was kind-of like a bunch of flash backs for Anastasia, it didn't play off on that very well - but it was a great introduction for them both.

From your summary, I expected this to be 3rd person, and I was pleasantly surpriaed it was not.

The great things mostly focused on your introduction of Noah. I liked it a lot - and the color of his hair got to me. "Too light to be black but too dark to be brown", it sort of reminded me of my natural hair color, haha. I really like Noah's character - he intrigues me.

My favorite part was when Anastasia said Noah puked on her - I started giggling internally.

It was a great read! Now, I read more. =)

So I'm a big fan of Jace! I have like three friends that act exactly like him lol
Also I wanted to say that you are the master of mystery. I just want to know what happen in Ana's life that she had to leave and you just not giving enough info ! I guess I'll just have to keep reading ;]

I find this interesting, I normally don't go for this type of thing, but I am enjoying it. You have written a very hooking and enetertaining first chapter and you hit on one of the things that we all desire, acceptance. I am truely enjoying this and I am reading more right away.

Ha Jace has a very big fan club doesn't he?

SO THIS WAS WONDERFUL YOU WONDERFUL PERSON YOU.

I really enjoyed it, much morel ighthearted at the begining than some of the other stuff, and I like how quirky Noah is. HE WAS GOING TO TELL HER THAT HE REALLY LIKED HER BEFORE SHE INTERUPTED. DAMN YOU ANA. Fuuu---

I swear to god she’s in love with me or something Mean girls, for the win.

<3

WHAT IS UP WITH HER HOME LIFE? WHO IS HER?