Dream of Me - Comments

WOAH. Didn't see that coming... Haha. I mean, I knew Ashlan and Gena would have to run into each other eventually... but DAMN. Ashlan straight up man-handled her man right in front of her. That's my girl. Lol can't wait for the next update. This is one of my favorite stories. :) I just love it so much. Ashlan and Zacky are so sweet together.

Yup, definitely my favorite chapter so far.
I loved it. The fact that Jimmy knew and inconspicuously mentioned it....xD

Loved it!!! :)

Yeah it took definitely way too long... But it was good... so good.. I just couldn't stop laughing and it was quite impossible to read like that :)

More, please! :))

omg, this chapter was fuuuuucking epic. it was just awesome. hand job under the table was definitely the best part, hahaha i absolutely loved it! and cannot wait for the next one :)

yum. yum. yum.

this kind of reminds me of a dream I had once...
you, me & Mikal & the fan-fiction conference.

yep. can't have a. BBQ without somebody's wiener getting touched.
I loved this chapter, biff.
& my boyfriend, so funny... Hahaha.

I love Jimmsy. ok, the end.

<3 your biff, Brea H.

OMG I freaking l love this chapter!
I love the part where Zacky and Ashlan's appetite for each other has not even gone down.
It is alway hot when they are both just lost in the passion of sex and just can't get enough of each other.
They are both each other's weakness and strong pillar.
And I definitely love how Ashlan won't back down from Gena's warning.
I seriously doubt that Gena would happy having a baby if she is just thinking about how she doesn't want having a baby ruin her figure.
I really think Zacky isn't the father of the baby.
Gena should be embracing pregnancy not complaining, I mean Ashlan would be just happy that she is pregnant with Zacky's child.
You can't hide anything from Jimmy, he knows about everything and I am glad that he is happy that Zacky and Ashlan are almost together.
Man Gena should not have challenged Ashlan because Ashlan will crush her!
Man I can't laughing about how Ashlan gave Zacky a hand job under the table and Zacky trying to cover up his orgasm! X3
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I cannot wait for the next update!

How the hell does Jimmy know/see all the stuff that goes on between Zack and Ashlan?! It drives me crazy and makes me laugh all at the same time. My fav part in this update had to be the handjob under the table. Zacky's comments were too damn funny,

yay, update! Loved it :)

Thank you. :3

Another amazing, amazing story! I love your writing :D Zacky and Ashlan are adorable, but Ashlan and Johnny are adorable as well, even if he's only a fling. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Where do I start? I've taken a few days but I've finally got around to finishing what you have up and I just love it to pieces. This story is very unique and full of fire, passion, and amazing characters.

I love how Ashlan was the one who had the problem. For once it wasn't the guy, which right off separated this story from a lot of others that I've read. She was the one who was out partying, leaving the guy home alone waiting around. She was the one who had the problem, and then she was the one who ended up fucking up their relationship.

Though, she turned herself around and you can't help but to love her character. She's such an amazing woman who has grown so much. She made something of herself despite being an addict.

Zacky makes me angry in this story at times because he's so selfish. He knows how hard this is on Ashlan but yet he continues to tug her along, even if he has Gena. I think her and Johnny using one another is actually a smart idea. She needs to be able to at least move on a little bit from Zacky, maybe then he'll see he's making a mistake by staying with Gena.

and I for one don't even think she's freaking pregnant! I just want to jump in the story and expose her for the witch she is, or maybe I'm just mad cause I'm totally sporting a team Ashlan shirt here.

Anyways, I love this story to bits. It's amazing and different. It's cute, and sexy at the same time. You've done really well with it!

That was like....one of the hottest things i've ever read.
Nice job ;]

I can't wait until the next update!!! Hurry up please?<3

I don't know if I'm the only one that caught on but all the chapter names are song names by Pink, correct?0:

Loved the update and hope you update again today. :)

Why do I get the feeling that the baby that Gena is carrying might be Zackys?
I mean all she seems to do is just laze around, and have Zacky do everything for her!
I really don't she is pregnant witH Zacky's baby because she would be have Zacky there with her.
I wonder if Johnny and Robin would hit it off but Johnny recently got out a relationship and he is not ready yet but he will be!
So he and Ashlan are still going to continue their activities?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay... even though I knew it was going to happen, I got super pissed off whenever Robin called. Hahaha. I was getting all hot & bothered with the Ashlan/Johnny sex & then... just like Johnny, I got my hopes up! Lmao. 

& the sexting/phone sex was hot! Lol. I likeeyy! but it was so sad after. when she started crying. ugh, fuck Gena! I hate her. Hahaha. 

I love you Bifton. great chapter! it got my excited, that's for sure! 

<3 Mrs. H.  

i noticed at least some of the chapter titles are pink songs. but on to more important things...oh. my. god. this update was beyond epically amazing, the way she bounced btwn johnny & zacky...yuuuuuum. very very awesome chapter, i absolutely cannot wait for the next update. please put me out of my misery soon :)

I fucking love this story! Put the next chapter up damn it! Haha pretty please? :-)

Oh my god I love this story so much. Please update it again soon.