I'm gonna be honest... I'm not a big fan of putting the whole lyrics of whatever song into a story cuz I see it as a way to fill up the story, but once I overcame that personal peeve, I actually enjoyed this story. I think it was greatly written & I could actually sense the 'teasing', something that other stories have failed to do for me . I just thought that I should let you know.
August 9th, 2012 at 06:47pm