Jealous Hearts Will Leave Us All In Ruins - Comments

i love this story with all my love i wish i could write as good as you :)

Okay. I think this story is really fucking AMAZING (:
You got much talent and skill. & I have fallen in love with this story.. please, Please, update soon! (:

Criticism?
Um.... there's not a whole lot to criticize but.. I don't know, the chapters could be longer with a lot more thought to them? Like more conflict. Not just four sentences you could add some pro's and con's.

Um, that's all I have for now. But this is a really good story, you have to update it soon.

There are no improvements need to this story! It is absolutely perfect and amazing and I can't get enough
:D

This is amazing!
You should update
:D

** Uhm, second page virginity stolen
Sue me

Your stories too good not to get more comment soooooo

:')

I'm just sat here, with like, tears in my eyes all "Lex and Jay" :'(
Can I maim Ava a little? Like, not to the point of death, just serious injury?
Then, Jack and Alex would be fine :D

See my thinking there?

You better post soon! I will poke you in the face with a pencil if not!
xoxo

Oh my goodness!
It was just so hot and cute and sweet and... Jalex!
And then pops up Ava.
Fucking christ girl, GTFO!
Disturbing Lex and Jack's time, I mean - who do you think you are?
;)

More puh-leease lovely <3

I like this I really do :) I cant wait for the next chapter :D

I don't even care that it was short!
It was amazing!
Daaang it, you make everything awesome <3
Jack is so shweeeet :P

Hurry up and post the next one ;)
xo

This story is amazing, and the new chapter was great as usual. :3 I hope alex and jack keep being cute but I'm nervous for when Ava comes back into the picture. :/

just sayin i fucking love this story

This is so far from shitty!
My god girl, you write sooo good, and I can totally imagine this happening!
I'm glad you didn't take the dramatic route, where Jack would normally go 'This was a mistake fgdfjgd lol'
So yeah :D I love it, even if you don't, so shhh :P

More asap
xo

You did amazing(: don't doubt yourself dear, I loved it! I just want the next one, like now:D

I knew it was moving too fast :| dammit!
But fghjuygbhn thankyou! xD
I probably, I've started it anyways ^.^

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I FUCKING LOVE YOUUU!
I was all, 'I bet they won't fuck, cos like, people never write them fucking this early, etc etc' but guuuuuuurl!
This just made my night
You're so fucking awesome at writing this shit, I swear to god!
More people need to read this!
Gonna have to advertise it some how ;)

You better update again!
xo

gahhh! fuckyes!
I agree with this chickka above me,
You killed me(:

But in a completely good way because it was a lovely chapter,
Update soon I beg of you! :D

Fucking A!
Finaaaally uuugh! :D
Damn it gurl, you write soo goood, I'm jelly, fr srs.

"Alex," I muttered, resting my forehead against his. "I want you."
~dead

Ya killed me with it, ya happy?
You should be, Jalex heaven is pretty gr8! :')

More toniiight? Maybe? Please?
xo

Wow, you're like some kind of Spanish genius! :')
And yeah, I was thinking Jack should top too, but I thought I'd get opinions on it :)
Update as soon as the webchat is over, promie :) I've got the next chapter pretty much figured out, so it should be easy :)

Jack and Alex are so friggin adorable.
Ovaries - gone, I tell you, goooone!

And, en mi opinion (look at my fucking spanish skills, ya'll), I think Jack should top :P Cos, well, yeah, it's Jack and Lex usually tops in Jalex soo...

:D

Update again tonight? ATL on GK chat should give you inspiration, yus?
xo