Another Chance to Live - Comments

Wow so Zacky found Brian long lost little sister that was believed to have to died in the school fire.
I bet Brian thought he was dreaming when he found out that really is Alexis, his baby sister.
And Alexis is trying to absorb that she just found her family but doesn't have any memories at all.
Brian is both happy and devastated that his sister is alive but she has no memories and become a shell of her former self.
I wonder how the rest of the family will react to the news that Alexis Haner is a still alive.
I know her parents are going to be in denial because how she is and where she is working.
And she was high this entire time, I was wondering why she was taking this calmly, I would think she would cry or start screaming or something.
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Hmm I might try to squeeze something in somewhere about Brian's reaction to after the fire.

Woah! I read the summary and that part about the incest, I thought it was going to be like a kiss or something but I was completely surprised when Brian had sex with Alexis.
So both Zacky and Jimmy are flying solo in this story and they both are very attracted to Alexis.
I bet now that Brian has seen that scar on her back and her name is going to be on Brian's mind until he finally finds out who she really is.
She still has no recollection of her who her family is, not one flashback? 0.0
She must have hit her head really hard to not remember her family or friends she has before.
Now Zacky is really attracted to her, he wants to come back and I bet he might be able to piece some things together once he gets to know Alexis even more.
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OMG I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really mean it!
The way you started really reeled me in, Alexis being Brian's younger sister that was believed to be dead because of the school fire!
And Alexis doesn't even remember her family due to hitting her head on the dumpster.
You should definitely make the second chapter from Brian's pov from the day the fire started.
Man she is really messed up isn't she, being raised by the man that found her until her body started to mature, making her look attractive.
Then him doing the most vile act of touching her, making her addicted to drugs and having sex with her!
Now that she is a hollo of her former self, and making a living working at a stripper joint.
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