I have NO words to describe how much I love this! I entered the same contest this is in (the one that never got judged) and I must say, you would have one by a landslide. This is so edgy and quirky. The narration seems to be coming from the heart of the city itself, like its the icy thoughts of all the locals manifested into one. I adore it. The way things are portrayed is stellar, especially the snowflakes hitting the pavement and the part about where she doesn't "rhyme her beginnings with her ends." Absolutely brilliant. I am in love.
May 20th, 2013 at 03:03am