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Thank you so much for reading! I'm trying my hardest to improve on my writing skills!

November 17th, 2012 at 06:51pm
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I liked this very much but you need to separate out your paragraphs and speech so It's not confusing :)

November 16th, 2012 at 06:15pm

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